Mr.5-1-3, the black mack, that rolls in Cadillacs,
the 84s and Vogues'll give you a heart attack
the swag of a true player, the fine ho layer
gonna break down the game for all the who-sayers
down on your luck, well I can fix that
no this ain't a trap, gonna show ya how to be a true mack
those lame-ass lines'll get yo ass smacked, probably jacked,
skull cracked, and all that, you don't want that crap
act uninterested, you'll get more attention
don't get too cocky, that ain't all in the pimpin'
when you get too thirsty, that lowers your chances
does alot of damage for a one night's romancin'
and if you can't dance,
you'll be sweatin' like a fat man in gym class
not tryin'a be an ass, just tellin' how it is
and steer clear if she has more than two kids
just sayin', when you'll pull up in that Caddy,
you don't wanna be asked if you're the real daddy
but if you wanna be a sucka, well, that's fine and dandy
like candy, from a baby cryin' all the time, momma tryin'a
find a Mr.Right, might take up all yo time,
but she'll give you what you like,
that's how the game goes, real playas get chose
and sometimes you'll get played by a fine ho,
who wants mo money, money, mo money, money, mo
just sayin', tho, you'll get trapped like a big toe.

I ain't finished with this, just need feedback.
'Cause I've been writing this for about 3 nights, and I just wanna know if I should finish it or not.

Finish it. Clean it up a lil' (make sure your delivery is set) then get ready to put it on audio. I laid out a lot of audio this weekend. I'll post the acapella for feedback tonight. But, Des got a new toy that he's playing with.

Already, I'mma work on it in a bit. I still need to cop a new mic, tho. Got one at Walmart a month back 'cause I got a giftcard, I wasted 8 bucks on it, and it's just as bad as the built-in one.

Yeah, I feel ya. I'm still in need. But, I got some pretty high grade headphones that have a "muff" on the end. Helps get out the distortion of any sound. Just gets a little muffled at times and it sounds like I'm disciplin' folks on the mic.