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    Default Barz for days call me Willy Wonka

    Call me a Beast but not from Marvel Comics
    Married to the rap game, the mic is platonic
    I have ill lines so just by reading em you might get sick
    I can even reverse time so now the tock is before the tick
    One of a kind, No not a poker game
    But I will poke her before I get her name


    - Just wanted to start off an all out freestyle drop for the board..everyone drop some bars.

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    niggas these days dont understand why i dont flip out and snap
    but then again none of these niggas understand why the fuck i rap
    couple ideas in my head, transmit that shit on a peice of paper
    got me a .22 peice with a double edge blade, call it a scraper
    i see niggas in my sights and make em dissapear like water vapor
    damn these clothes lookin real bloody, needa hit up the draper

    quick lil lines


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    They not fuckin wit u boo

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    There's niggas over 30 on here?

    No life.

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    I keep rapping off the dome its insanity
    I have the IT factor like the Adams Family
    I make beats my bitch like another prom
    I bring terror to the streets like another Saddam
    Lines for days like I was a crack fiend
    Here's a dictionary to see what I mean
    Call me loco, You can call me nuts
    If I was anal my name would be Seymor Butts


    Lol...Bored...

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    speakin of insanity, my brain fried from too much wet
    my old personality, im simply a rundown silhouette
    illmatic on bars and higher then the stars
    im rollin myself a pretty potent cigar
    PAP PAP PAP the glock dont stop when it rests in my paws
    only thing i expect nigga is a little unjust applause


    Quote Originally Posted by Ronni313 View Post
    They not fuckin wit u boo

    Quote Originally Posted by djslo361 View Post
    There's niggas over 30 on here?

    No life.

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    damnit, i just dropped all my bars.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Ronni313 View Post
    They not fuckin wit u boo

    Quote Originally Posted by djslo361 View Post
    There's niggas over 30 on here?

    No life.

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    I got bars for days call em narcotics
    I heat this forum with my HOT topics
    Never surrender, I don't carry a white flag
    Yeah I am good, so I still just might brag
    Bars of gold, Yeah I am never poor
    I use meta's So you know what a meta's for
    My lines so addicting I can overcharge
    This war is just starting it's not over sarge
    High in demand you can call me HBO
    I am not a running back this isn't an H B show
    Words for days, Bars for years
    And when I say I am a SAVAGE don't mean the WONDER YEARS


    I think dudes name was Fred Savage that was on that show Wonder Years...

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    whats the dam deal big j leanin like a fuckin 5th wheel
    i can drop 8 bars and i aint talkin bout a pill
    toomuch of me is like an overdose when the flow compose
    drank and the kush bout got me feelin comatose
    ima throw my bows out knee high
    decapitating hoes tryin to blow to be high
    and the rest break they necks tryin to inspect before the green light. . . . . . .

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    oh shit nigga! look who it is
    big J lettin it release like he takin a long sought piss
    ima let myself go, cuz thats when i shine oh so bright
    tonight me and these xanax bars make for a sleepy reunite
    half day at school today, only held a nigga down fo about two hours
    ima mothafuckin goldmember baby, austin trigga powers


    Quote Originally Posted by Ronni313 View Post
    They not fuckin wit u boo

    Quote Originally Posted by djslo361 View Post
    There's niggas over 30 on here?

    No life.

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    i got the austin powers , blue ray on my screens
    when the trunk pop it reads "Big J Fuck up da whole scene"
    boppers on my thing , they takin it and wont lay back
    i leav'em fealin drained like a million dollar pay back
    if ya hatin me then i put you in a category
    thats a list fulla bitchs gettin caught up like its statutory
    i can ride bangin bustin stitches or ride that hoe factory
    it really dont matter to me i squash the chatter wit three
    shots to ya dome like im creatin casper MC's
    i lift the casket wit ease and crush it down into the bottle
    these fake internet thugs work my nerves worse than a case of full throttle
    shakin and jitterin,i think im ready to smoke a splif again
    you might as well buy ya own cuz aint noway im gonna split the GIN
    sunny d what i sip it in while im pimpin pens got me leanin so hard i stand up and fall down and split my chin , , , LMAO , , ,

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    Bars of gold you can call me King Midas
    Rap for 300 but my name isn't Leonidas
    My originality is complex get on my level
    Going in the fast lane, pedal to metal
    Destination to a place where I wreak havoc
    On point with my lines..like a dirk..no maverick
    Who needs Brawn when I have all the brain
    No pinky, Just a rapper trying to spread his name

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    no 2-3 zone, i ball on foot like football backwards
    cheese stay on my mind like a fan of the Packers
    im laughing in the face of those who wanna act thug
    no dj reference when i cut & break them like actors
    ironically, my feelings for spitting bars is a waste
    cos i spit flavor but you won't receive this taste
    welcome back is ya chant? guess your referring to Mase
    plex? then im your bathroom sink water, all in your face
    call this forensics, to figure me out you need professionals
    cos i am protected from aids like condoms on the genitals
    mighty sick with the words, i won't need the rehearsal
    so versatile with the style, from underground to commercial
    a quick shout to EPT, residential status location
    you doing work? yeah, putting in time for your vocation
    im out since time is ticking on my crack sultan watch
    and i bet if you feeling my flow, you'll click the thank button, watch!

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    i hit the thanx button , cuz i liked the contribution
    let the flowetry grow mass untill it sparks united fusion
    bars upon bars we RAP the world in verbal nukes son
    i stay ready for war like a combat vet still sleepin wit his boots on
    ridin around town screens watchin willy wonka
    trunk shakin harder than a dog shittin razor blades it raise and displays "i got more toys than tonka"
    i meditate in a sauna , not the kind you thinkin bout
    cheech and chong in the slab blowin marijuana clouds
    swangin so hard i wound up on top of crowds
    roll the window down like "i didnt see all these folks,hol'up,watch out,dont get blood on my spokes". . .f/o

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    Big J in my corner we the heavyweight champs
    And we stick it to more states then stamps
    Original rhymes to put you on your toes
    Getting more women then Santa has ho's
    Clean it and fresh I like to keep it sanitary
    And the hip hop game has less life then a cemetery
    The grass is always greener on the other side
    Have this game cooked up, call it southern fried
    I don't need a gat..i cause verbal man slaughter
    Spreading legs faster then Moses parted water
    My hip hop chemistry is off the charts
    I get to to the point off the boards like darts
    My flow is contagious inhaled on a daily basis
    Never racist just simply ahead by a couple hundred paces

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    Boog gets on the pad, TTO gets ta clickin',
    Everybody say 'thanx' like its coded religion.
    Da Vinci was no vision, jus' tha source in, decision,
    Whether God or Big Bang, praise the comp, I petition.
    Citing our stories, in our new form of diction,
    We be the new edition, verse BIBLE, as written.
    By God's wrath, yes, we may just get smitten,
    My peg into one's hole, still irregular fittin'.
    Appreciate what's givin', but a burden I'm liftin',
    No matta where you sittin', the world jus' keeps on spinnin'.
    A gift I am given, so I jus' keep on pitchin',
    Strike on life, change-up on one we livin'.

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    Yo 915Ace...ur msg box be full..was responding to last msg..and said it was full..

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    should be good now...

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    Like I gotta bad-signal on my cell I'm droppin-barz/
    watch these weak bitchez fold like playin cards//
    shyt I ain't talkin Lays when I say I'm hungry for chips/
    it's like bein on LSD because this life is a trip!//
    on anotha tip-fuck the world,because this life is a bitch/
    I pray for blessings,still I feel like I'm gettin skipped//
    done kicked it with the blues,but no I'm not a crip/
    I'm on the edge right now,can't seem to get a grip//
    I turn on the radio,and everything that I hear is wack/
    these rappers think they sick,I think they hypochondriacs//
    but homie I got lines that are known to shock-mindz/
    and I'm here to sanitize the game like peroxide//

    lol fuck it jus playin around,wuddup TTO

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    i put this on LB but i wanted to get feedback from yall on it so. . .

    you know what the deal is but dont step to me sideways //
    you gone find out real quick im more intricate than inner city highways //
    plex and perpetrating is all the game seem to consist of //
    now a days got me debating if i should cut a hatas wrist off //
    actin like im pissed off 24/7 //
    knock a bitch off like my semi floored tha whole section //
    penetrate your mind with word plays like inception and when im done un-hypnotize you with no clue of deception //
    what the fuck was you expectin these aint battle verses bro //
    big j speak his mind like a eskimo on a exxo' tryin to caress tha snow //
    taggin up some toes lyrically demolishin foes 5th saggin hangin low , watch it glow as i polish my 4's
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    It's straight @ Big J...is it a track verse or what...

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    naw its just sum i whipped up real quick , i coulda took more time on it but i usually just put down whatever comes off top

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    Best advice I could give you is try to keep your lines the same length so your flow is on point..don't want more then a word or two more...then the line before or after...like how my bars are...U have good vocab and all...maybe work on your wording some..wording and choice of words is prob the hardest thing bout rapping..don't wanna have too much filler..should just get straight to point/punchline..

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    thats what i have the most trouble with , i can think of tons of topics but the key is to fit the topics with the wordplay and stay on point . when i flow it in my head it sounds tight , one syllable bouncin off another , but its hard to translate a spoken flow into text. . . thanx for the feed back

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    Yeah these days when you listen to rappers..alot of em can't even stay on topic...the first verse will be on point..then the 2nd verse be bout some other stuff...its wack...

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